Jayden & Hope

It is a good feeling and is a good show of art and colors. The voices show the contrast of the characters. There is a good show of change throughout the story. The art just needs a little bit more art and it would show them drawing better. I would add a story from his past.

The art is lovely, but the setting is quite vague. The War is mentioned offhandedly in Act 2 as some kind of event that happened centuries ago, and yet just seems to be common knowledge? And she recognizes Jayden as a warlord from that time? Then she immediately knows that he doesn't like magic, and that's the reason he promptly tries to leave her shop to start another war? And are curses and magic different? He said that no magic works on him, but then how did he get turned into a statue? In any case, I think this story has a lot of potential, and it is rather cute as is.

The whole the story, dialogue, and art is so amazing. I don't think there has to be any change to the video except adding a screen title in the video. Overall, this was fantastic!