John's Phobia

Violette, this is amazing work. I know how hard you’ve worked and there are so many fascinating ideas here. I can’t wait to see more, should you continue to follow this story, and the to be continued card at the end means you probably will be:) I can’t wait to see more as you continue to build this world. There’s so much to explore! There are so many possibilities. Keep going:)👍🏼👍🏻

I loved everything about your story. Well crafted story arc, excellent character development (which really made me care and be interested in where this was going), and excellent drawings!!! Little things that took you time, like the knock on the door, really added to the richness of what you created. And the ending is perfect - I hope you are working on the "to be continued" next reel now! Well done, a very engaging story. Your time and attention really made this enjoyable to experience.

What I loved most was the drawings of characters and expressions and the use of colour and light. Also the suspense after John was terrified, it scared me a lot and I was waiting for something scary to happen again. I only have one question: are John and the girl family? Great work!