Ollie

By Diego's Team

Description: Hello! This is "Ollie"!! It is the name of the main character, a little ogre. This is what I have done so far, it is the very beginning. So if you are prompted to do the feedback, then here is what I want you to tell me: can you understand that the animals are having a normal life and that the ogres are doing hard physical work? There will be more scenes about only this information, so just talking about those you are seeing here, very "crowd" scenes. The last image is just an image I had already done of the main character before, just to show the character, and of course there is no scene yet about her. Yes, the ogres are purple.

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Anonymous---
This is a very great start! To answer your questions, I did see the animals more relaxed and chilling in a town. Maybe some additional shots of some of the animals laughing or shopping, doing more of these "normal life" activities. Also, there were many characters at the first image, so I would suggest reducing the number of characters or reducing theh details per character because it was a lot of visual information to absorb and try to see the details. The next image is a lot of details of the architecture and the people, so similar comment here. Maybe change the color of the line for the back building to a gray and definitely reduce details in the back as opposed to the front. What is most important? The buildings or the people? For the ogre, it was clear to see they were busy working but the introducing shot made it seem the ogre was going to hurt the animals. Overall, this is great start!
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Anonymous---
What I loved most was...the concept An idea for making it stronger is...add voices in dialogue. What I found unclear was...the story line