Mephistel Lieutenant Angel

The illustrations and video effects, along with the story plot are well done and elaborate. I can see you have put a lot of efford in your video. My biggest criticism is the information overload in the history video, which ironically and maybe intentially similar to that of real-life history classes. There was a lot of information and not enough visuals to easily illustrate the point. Just a small example, when Mephistel asks Michael for advice, I didn't even know there was another character because it was such a quick statement and not much visual interest to indicate it was someone else. My suggestion is either to simplify the history video portion or break it up so that students are being rude and asking questions despite the reaper's warning. In actuality, my favorite part was the reaper's personality and the ending with Brailen asking his question. It gave a different insight for the context of the history video. Overall, this is a good video with tons of style and personality.

the illustrations are beautiful. Nice jobB What I loved most was... An idea for making it stronger is. Add more sound effects.

christian, you have an epic story here. I loved the professor character at the beginning. it was a great way to interject some humor and a brilliant technique to frame the story. i also loved the different animation techniques on display, including the silhouettes. congratulations on all of your hard work!