Tyron

I really saw some great progress in your storyreel from your first act to now. You character really feels connected with the storyline now, and it has a good flow of incidents that leas to one another. Good work overall

I really like the unique film style of the narrator talking to the character. I also enjoyed how Tyron is a relatable character who wants to be good at everything but feels bad if he doesn't get it the first time. At times I felt as though the pacing was a bit off, like the film progressed too fast and too slow at times. But that was a minor concern. Overall great job and good luck!