Final - Dave

Overall good work. Perhaps to make your reel more presentable I would suggest to include sound effects and perhaps even a background score. This will really help tying all the elements in your story together! Nice work with the story

I like how the story plays out with the louse actually becoming the girl's friend. I wonder when she'll realize that he's actually not good for her hair . . . but as the wise Master Wu once said, "The best way to defeat your enemy is to make him your friend." (Sorry, I'm a LEGO Ninjago fan.) Nice short film and good luck in the exhibition!