Fighting in space
Fighting in space
By Unnamed Team
Description: where 2 planets fight over getting the spotlight but end up hurting a friend without even realizing it. They figure out how to work together in the end
- BBrooklyn---
I do love the concept of your story, however I feel a better way to fully draw in the characters is going into more details of how the earth is affected as well as go into detail on how the earth will continue on now that it’s half day half night and how it’s affected