Tom's adventure

When I first read the description, I will be honest, I thought, "How interesting can a story about a tomato be? I don't like tomatoes lol!" But now, I so want a plush of your specific tomato, Tom! I was pleasantly surprised to by the tone at @3:15 - with the human behaving like a monster towards the vegetables! What?! Great story! I want to also share some specific points too in case it helps: @2:38, I wasn't sure where Tom was staring at - not a big deal as I got it later but noting that I was a bit confused as everything else was super clear. @2:40, I knew it was a map to the destination, but I didn't have enough time to process it. I assume the map was drawn on a rock? Maybe a shot of a wide view from inside of the pot. I just wasn't fully oriented. @2:40-241, maybe clarify the trash with a gray fill color and increase the line-weight of the path. The box on the right was clear but there was too much information on the left side. (The pan from left to right did help). You can also consider removing the trees/grass details to just focus on the trash, path and destination box. @2:49 - that transition confused me from the vegetable pointing to stepping outside. I still though understood that it was the escape. But I guess I don't know what I am seeing. @2:57 gave me a big "ooohhh" moment. I am wondering if this shot should be a bit earlier so I can orient myself. @5:35 - I was a bit confused with seeing the vegetable that died ("wait, did it come back to life? Did it survive? Or was it waiting at the destination the whole time? No, it died...Is it another vegetable?") and later realized it was a statue - maybe show one shot of them sculpting the statue. @5:37-5:42 was super cute. @5:42 is a great ending shot. The @5:45 is also a nice twist, but something feels off with the transition of the black shot. I can't exactly point it out, so I hesitate giving this feedback. An idea came to mind that what if you zoom out from the 5:42 scene similar to the opening shot and in the background, you see the silhouette of the farmer leaving and then have the shot of 5:45 with the for sale sign. Just a thought. Again, your video is phenomenal! I love how we connect with Tom and then the interesting dynamic with the farmer - wasn't expecting it all!

I love your story and the way you told it. The character is super endearing. The villain is very clear. I connected all the way through. Great job!!

This was great! the story had a great arc, the number of slides did a great job of conveying the action.

The story is very compelling! The plot, the character, the style, the music, sound effects, the drawings, everything is clear and interesting to follow. The use of visual storytelling is very clear, for example when Tom show how is he preparing to become harvested along a checklist. It is clear his want. In character development, Tom's emotions, struggles, giving up and triumph are very clear since the beginning. It is notable all the hardwork and time invested in this story. The story structure is clear and the mysterious ending is exciting! Congratulations in such great work!

Great visuals and simple audio to tell your story. I was a little confused about the relationship between the rejected veggies and the farmer, but I was still invested in the story wondering how it would end.

I really LOVE your story ! Your storytelling is amazing and your art is magnificent ! I really enjoyed following your project and I think Tom is a great character and its story should be made as a full movie !