Hidden Melody

I am really curious what the note left by her mother was, maybe bringing that story about a bond between a mother and a daughter to the forefront of the story can drive that thread deeper. Her childhood will definitely help unveil a thread in her life.

Your art is very good

Wow, what an incredible start! From the moment I began watching, I was completely captivated. The combination of music and the artistry of the opening scene are absolutely sublime. As soon as the narrator entered the scene, I felt like I was transported right into the antique store. The pacing of the story is spot on, creating a perfect balance that keeps the viewer engaged throughout. Feel free to leave or take the feedback below... I have a few suggestions to enhance the experience even further: Firstly, while watching, I initially thought that the magical porcelain ballerina was the only one of her kind. However, as the story progresses, it becomes clear that there are many more like her. Perhaps a bit more clarity on this point would help maintain consistency for the viewer. Additionally, delving deeper into the traumatic event that the protagonist experienced could help us better understand her frustration and emotional journey. Providing some background information on her past, particularly regarding her relationship with her mother and the contents of the note, would add layers to the narrative and deepen our connection with the character. Lastly, the moment when she embraces her imperfections is truly beautiful and serves as a powerful conclusion to the story. Ensuring this moment is highlighted and given the attention it deserves will leave a lasting impact on the audience. Overall, fantastic work! I'm truly impressed by what you've created, and I'm excited to see how these suggestions can further elevate the storytelling experience. Keep up the amazing work!

Nice Story