The Little Red Ornament

By Jolie H.

Description: One little ornament has dreams of being able to get down from the Christmas tree. One day that dream comes true, however, the little ornament ends up regretting it.

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Lydia---
The story isn’t very compelling because I get confused at some points, and I don’t get who the ornament’s “family” is. Maybe you could also make a more realistic reason for why the cat would jump on the tree- maybe it saw its reflection in the ornament and tried to get it? Maybe it thought it saw something moving? maybe there was something moving! I like the art- it’s simple and colorful. Another reason it’s a bit boring is because there’s only one character, and the problem doesn’t really get resolved. The character also stays the same, which makes it not interesting to me.
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Hannah---
story is good, and artwork is amazing!
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Ella---
I think that this is very good but the voiceover is very guite and a little hard to hear. I like the story line and the drawings they are both very good.
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Zoe---
The story was really cute