It's a Frog Story by Cleo Jacob

I loved your story and narration. Heart warming and delightful!

I really enjoy your story about frogs! You have a great name for your character.

Hello Cleo! Olly and all of the frogs are very lovely. I loved that the colours and drawings, they were very soothing. The story was lovely and the moral of it about friendship is beautiful. I just have on question: Was the goal in the school being the best at finding love or becoming human? It wasn't very clear to me, maybe receiving a diploma of it could help.

I love this story! It really showed the amazing power of friendship! You did a great job of expressing your story and had some wonderful compositions! There were a few sound issues but your passion for the story really shone through. You might want to slow down the video a little to give yourself and the audience time to digest certain scenes but all in all, great work!

This story is beautiful, Cleo! My most sincere congratulations for your awesome work, you have created an exceptional work full of values, emotion and messages straight to the heart. Undoubtedly, these frogs conquer the heart of your viewer with this adventure that goes beyond the limits of love and friendship, bravo! I love your style of drawing and the expressiveness of the characters, your way of narration and the chosen music and the use of shots and scenes fully immerse us in the story. WHAT A FANTASTIC JOB, CONGRATULATIONS! :)

Nice little story about the struggles of a character wanting love and the difficult road ahead in search of friendship. With a little adjustment to the pacing and a little less dialogue this story could reach its full potential.