Michael James' Adventure

By Nathaniel and Onipa'a

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Natalia---
I LOVE YOUR IDEA its really good and I like how it was that he thought popularity was the BEST thing ever but it is not the best
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Chyanne---
This was a pretty good story but maybe try adding color, besides that great job.
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Lily---
This story is very interesting and the dragon is a really great touch