Story Reel Final Cut
Story Reel Final Cut
By Vanesa and Gisselle
- AAfton---
It's good and I love the sound effects, but background music and more emotion would make this significantly better.
- DDominic---
I like how when they give her the candle she comes back so it can be a happy ending
- EElla---
I think that this could go very far if you would explain the details a little bit more because it is a little confusing, is this magic? I think that it is nice to see her parents and that she doesn't really die. Good job!
- TTreven---
It has potential, I say it could be greater if you expanded on the candle and why the family has it. It also got dark very quick into the story, maybe some more details on her life after coming back to life.