If Only...

By Me, Myself, and I

Description: Alyssa lives in the city and works as an insurance worker. She hates her monotonous life. Everything changes when her dreams come true, but first she must overcome her affliction.

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Jonanthon---
this story is well made, has enough detail to get the story accross, and the story can relate to the audience.
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Chloe---
The story was a little hard to understand. I think the art has a lot of potential, but I would have included dialogue bubbles. If I did not have the description to go off of, I wouldn't have known what was happening in the story.
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Carsyn---
To make it better I think it could us emote color.