Omar story

I think this story has lots of potential. I like your visuals, very simple and to the point. The plot is very digestable and straight forward and I think you have something here that is worth fleshing out. I think something that can help your story is to give the audience insight into the creator. Why would they create a robot so hateful and violent? Did he instill his negative emotions into the robot's programming? Was it an intentional act or something he did without much thought? What convinced him to change the robot programming? Great Job!